Love paragraph number six... Presents an interesting question of privacy versus safety, and the (possible) moral complications with profiting off of someone else's life/misery...
I was so upset I missed this fight. But reading this made me feel better...a little. Good pre-game pep up stuff, but I would've liked to see it fer reals.
So even though I've sworn to myself to not give into the horrible temptation to go see this movie....I think i might have to. (and then throw up later mind you...)
I thought that the quotes used in this article were effective in portraying Huckabee as a really likable guy that seems to have some solid advice for his party.
This just reminded me of the article and interview that we did with Quietdrive... they even put in a few lines of straight question and answer too. The newsy content of the article itself it alright, though i thought that they could have gone into more detail with paragraph two.
Show not tell lede sums up the entire article nicely. However, there was one point about social inequality that was brought up about possible negative consequences from the flood of people staying long periods.
Two great dreams realized. They get a puppy AND they get to meet Hannah Montana. Man, am I jealous.
ugh. this made me depressed. if my backup schools are suddenly raising their standards then my chances of getting into the college that i actually want to go to just went up a bajillion percent.
I nicely written article with a lot of humor and most importantly, valid points.
I wish that we could get letters to the editor like these. =\
I thought that the lead was very...er...confident. I liked it. Though its a very specialized oped that requires a little more thorough reading, I thought that the content was compelling enough.
It just put everything into perspective. Even though most of us realize that the press hypes up almost all of its coverage, that doesn't stop us from buying into it. Nice statistics to back up opinion.
I thought that this mirrored the kind of articles that we have been running about our sports teams, particularly about of (new) girls golf team. As an occasional golfer myself, I was pleased to see that this appears to be a growing trend among other high schools.
I thought that starting the article with a long quote was an interesting choice; it threw me off, because I initially thought that the quote had been said about Barack Obama...until I read the last part of it anyways.
I loved paragraph number two. Actually, I really liked the whole thing...it put the last few months in retrospect, and it made me a little bit nostalgic too... It was witty and reflective, I liked the scrappiness of the paragraph three from the bottom.
Thank you grandma for sending me this link =] I thought this was a bizarre news event that was a fun read. It gives perspective; because at least the majority of us don't end up splitting apart our houses after we break up with someone.
Alright I know this is old, but come on, its Anderson Cooper... As far as Opeds go, this is an interesting read, the quality of writing is good and its humorous and critical at the same time. ...........i want his job. =O
I love how critical this is; the writer clearly knows what she's talking about. The first paragraph is very story-telling-ish, and the second paragrph clearly packs the punch in the review.
I personally love fall, so the great adjectives to describe the season that are used in the lead hooked me right away. I also happen to really like roasted vegetables...
The article is vivid in description and to the point. It does a good job on reporting what happened; it includes witness reports, a possible cause, and it also portrays the emotions of the people who are suffering because of what happened.
While I normally would bypass football related stories, I was intrigued by the beginning of the first line. I liked it because I thought that it rang true, and not just for college football, but for any sports team.
I thought that the topic was hilarious to read about. I would've never guessed that something as sacred/painful such as giving birth would be put on display for so many people to observe. I feel a little sense of sarcasm, but its sarcasm that I can appreciate.
The lead of the story is really well-written because it gives the who, what, where, and when all in one long sentence.
I thought that this was an interesting insight to the legend that is Michael Phelps; and I promise that I'm not seeding this because I am a "phan".Overall this article was a creative insight to something that a lot of people have seen this last week.
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